Yakubika High - My Life in High School

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Yakubika High - My Life in High School

Post  Tanner Wolf on Wed Mar 30, 2011 6:09 am

This is the first two paragraphs of a story I began today. This is all I have so far, but I was wondering if you guys think I should continue with it.

The theme is like a High School Drama.


I’ve always wondered why everyone else just avoids me. Yeah, sure, it’s High School. High School is different than Middle School, the way people dress, the ‘popularity’ groups, even the kids who were your best friends ever since Kindergarten have left to join others. What is it with High School that makes everything change and fall apart? I’m Maryana Rose Anna, and this is my life in High School.


I started out in Yakubika High like any other student. Wandering around the halls like a little lost puppy. All the usual, we all had to go through this at some point. Even the seniors who seem like they never had to go through this, like they know everything had to do it. But I’m just a freshman. A freshman who knows no one, a freshman who just moved in from out of town. Luckily I moved in before the year started, or else having to walk through the halls alone may have just been even worse.
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Post  Fennec on Wed Mar 30, 2011 8:13 am

Woow awesome job, liz. Did you check out my Captive story?

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Post  WalrusFaces (Layla) on Thu Oct 06, 2011 4:55 am

This is very good deary, but might i offer a piece of constructive criticism? Use some more detail but other than that this is a nice little story you have here and i actually would like to see what happens. Smile
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