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Post  eva_strange on Mon Sep 20, 2010 7:08 am

7th grade

i.
it's suicide to speak
and she knows it
but she has to try, anyway
("hello")

she is ignored

she goes home and cries
her diary listens
her teddy bear listens
but mommy's at work so she can't listen

ii.
she tries to sit with them but
("no" "but-" "no")
so she tries to sit with them
but it's just the same

she sits alone

she goes home and dies
just a little inside
her teddy bear listens
her diary's her friend

iii.
she smiles at them
they just glare back
("can we be friends?")
she doesn't care anymore

she cries silently

she goes home and kills herself
a little outside
her teddy bear listens
and her razor is her friend

8th grade

i.
new year, fresh start
or not
("hi!" "stupid bitch")
she just keeps smiling

she doesn't go to school that day

she goes to her room
and breaks the mirror
and screams at her reflection
but she's got her friend with her

ii.
she's not at school anymore
they whisper where she went
("ran away" "died" "i hope so")
she's still smiling

she's just so happy

she sit in her room
and dies inside and outside without them knowing
she's replaced the razor with a new best friend
a noose

iii.
they come to school
but principal sends them home
("go home. i can't look at your faces")
the world stops spinning when the news comes on.

iiii.
she's not alone

she hangs from the rafters
little sister's screams
and tears mix with her sister's blood
her wrist is bleeding
on her suicide note
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Post  Jenna on Mon Sep 20, 2010 7:33 am

I fought the tears reading the whole thing.Beautiful.

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Post  eva_strange on Mon Sep 20, 2010 7:57 am

thank you. I loved writing it, and it did make me a little teary-eyed as I wrote it, too. I'm always surprise at the depth it has for people, but it's a good surprise.
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Post  Jenna on Mon Sep 20, 2010 8:02 am

It relates to me...Like a lot.

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Post  Guest on Mon Sep 20, 2010 8:05 am

I loved it.
It was really sad, and it brought tears to my eyes too.

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Post  eva_strange on Tue Sep 21, 2010 9:17 am

I'm sorry it has to relate to you -- no one should have to know what that feels like.

And thank you. <3
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Post  babydoll16508 on Tue Sep 21, 2010 11:21 am

This is really emotional, and good....I liked it, I think you know what I mean by that, truely amazing.
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Post  raynebow2 on Mon Mar 12, 2012 9:34 pm

That was AMAZING.
Truly amazing..
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